RyanKajito's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brother Battle]

It was a good sprite movie!

I think it was a very good sprite movie! The sprites went smoothly and the whole fight scene was cool. I think you could add better music for the fight scene though. It was very good for your first flash! I think that the story line should have been a bit more unique. I think the movie was very good especially for you first movie!

[Ness Goes to the Arcade]

It could be a lot better.

At first it seemed like it was going to be really good. Then, it started going down hill. The random part at the end where he gets squished by a foot didn't seem funny to me. His walking went pretty smoothly. I think that it was pretty funny how he was climbing down the cliff and fell. I thought he was going to continue getting hurt on his way to the arcade. But no, that's not what happened. I think that you could have done a lot better and put an actual good story line to it.

FattyWhale responds:

Like I said, I did this on a whim so didn't really plan anything out. I'm working on some projects though, so maybe you will see something improved in the future.

[StopMotion Fun!]

That was good!

I liked it. It looked pretty realistic. I like all of the tricks you put in it such as eating all of those items. I also like how you made it look like they were coming back out through your eyes or your ears. The song was good but I don't think it really fit your flash. I think perhaps, you could have put a different song in the movie to make it better. It was a good idea and some of the tricks you did were pretty original. I think it was a good stopmotion flash that looked pretty realistic.

JimmyDodger responds:

I was mostly aiming for the realism of this movie, and the humour. It was pretty hard though seeing as I had to do a picture at a time. Sorry about the song though. Thought it had a certain rhythm to it. Oh well.

Thanks for the review.

[She's Gone..]

I liked it!

It was a very good music video. Though, one thing that could definetely be improved was the art. Him walking looked horrible. That background was bad. You could've added more detail. Especially the cliff at the end, at first I didn't even know what it was. It would have been much better if you didn't use stick figure and actually drew the characters. But it was still good. It was a sad flash and I think the music you put in it matched it very well. The story line was pretty good but I think you should've added how his wife died. I liked it though and it was a good flash!

JimmyDodger responds:

Thanks for the review.

It was my first flash, so I wasn't really aimed for graphics. It wasn't even going to be a movie before I decided to submit it. It was just gonna be a experimental project. :D

I didn't want to show how the girl dies because I wanted you to try and make up your own solutions. One of them kind of movies. :D

[Drunk Again..]

It was a pretty good music video.

I like the song you used in it. The graphics could be improved though. It had a pretty story line but maybe there could be more humor in it. It was nice and long. The lip sync wasn't very good though, it made it look like he wasn't really singing which made is an important part of the movie. It was good but could be improved in some ways.

JimmyDodger responds:

I wasn't really trying to go for humour in this movie..Being a sad movie and all. I don't think it would be good if it's all sad, then right at the end, something jumps out and says "JOKING! THIS IS FUNNY. JOKEY" or something like that. I didn't really wanna lose the style the movie had.

Thanks for the review.

[M.A.of Scott and Taylor 2]

That was awesome!

I enjoyed watching the movie! It was very hilarious! I was laughing at the beginning when it said, "will this movie ever start? Find out on the next episode!" and the credits began playing but went to the movie right after. There is good voice acting but the quality was pretty poor. The jokes in it were very funny though! It kept me laughing! Your style is very unique and I can't wait to see more flash from you!

[Time Squad [Part 2]]

That was too great!

I loved it! It was so hilarious! I was literally laughing out loud when I watched it! I don't get how Blockhead feel and somehow survived though. It has a very good plot and it has very good graphics. The music quality was great! I do think the story line is great though! The movie was seriously funny and I really can't wait for the third part!

[Time Squad [Part 1]]

That was a great flash!

That seemed like a movie of Blockhead instead of just an episode! It kept me laughing! It was so hilarious with Blockhead acting like an idiot! The movie has a perfect plot! I really liked the idea! I liked art in it too, it is smooth and it looks really good. The sound quality of the voices was good too! The movie was very hilarious and had a great plot!

[the YuYu]

The art was great!

Seriously, those were some instense graphics! I really enjoyed watching this movie and I like the whole Brackenwood series! The music you put in there was great too! I like how you could easily skip scenes at the bottom of the screen. The art was simply a masterpiece.

[the PICO DAY anthem]

That was great!

I loved the song you made. It was a very good idea for Pico Day. I like how you put a bunch of characters that's not in Pico like Salad Fingers and Stewie Griffen and the others. It had good lyrics in it and now I have the song stuck in my head. I think Pico had good voice acting also.