RyanKajito's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Jestar's D-DAY SKATE 2-]

Much better!

You used characters instead of stick figures this time! It makes the movie much better! The effects in it were cool. I like how you made it look like it was going in slow motion. And the sounds such as when the characters were landing and doing ollies, made it seem more realistic. The movie had very graphics. Especially, when he did tricks. His movement and his board movement made it seem even more realistic. The song you put there matches the flash very well. I think this is a very good flash and it better than the first flash.

Jestar responds:

Thanks :]

[- Jestar's D-DAY SKATE -]

Well, it was pretty good!

I liked it, the graphics seemed good (other than the stick figures), the music matched the movie, and the tricks seemed pretty need. It seemed pretty realistic with the sound effects in it. I think you did a good job on animating the board and movements for when the character is doing tricks. Unfortunately, it seemed pretty boring. Though, it was still a good flash.

Jestar responds:

Mmhm. =]

[Daily Short]

Sorry but I just didn't like it.

It made no sense, it was random, and it was very short. Next time add a plot to it! Add better music! Put more things in it! And make it longer! It wasn't good at all and I know you can do much better. I think this belongs in a collection of shorts rather than having its own movie.

Frostbreath responds:

You speak of things that i already know of. And i got my first zero! This shall be celebrated with firecrackers!

[Ness Goes to the Arcade]

It could be a lot better.

At first it seemed like it was going to be really good. Then, it started going down hill. The random part at the end where he gets squished by a foot didn't seem funny to me. His walking went pretty smoothly. I think that it was pretty funny how he was climbing down the cliff and fell. I thought he was going to continue getting hurt on his way to the arcade. But no, that's not what happened. I think that you could have done a lot better and put an actual good story line to it.

FattyWhale responds:

Like I said, I did this on a whim so didn't really plan anything out. I'm working on some projects though, so maybe you will see something improved in the future.

[StopMotion Fun!]

That was good!

I liked it. It looked pretty realistic. I like all of the tricks you put in it such as eating all of those items. I also like how you made it look like they were coming back out through your eyes or your ears. The song was good but I don't think it really fit your flash. I think perhaps, you could have put a different song in the movie to make it better. It was a good idea and some of the tricks you did were pretty original. I think it was a good stopmotion flash that looked pretty realistic.

JimmyDodger responds:

I was mostly aiming for the realism of this movie, and the humour. It was pretty hard though seeing as I had to do a picture at a time. Sorry about the song though. Thought it had a certain rhythm to it. Oh well.

Thanks for the review.

[She's Gone..]

I liked it!

It was a very good music video. Though, one thing that could definetely be improved was the art. Him walking looked horrible. That background was bad. You could've added more detail. Especially the cliff at the end, at first I didn't even know what it was. It would have been much better if you didn't use stick figure and actually drew the characters. But it was still good. It was a sad flash and I think the music you put in it matched it very well. The story line was pretty good but I think you should've added how his wife died. I liked it though and it was a good flash!

JimmyDodger responds:

Thanks for the review.

It was my first flash, so I wasn't really aimed for graphics. It wasn't even going to be a movie before I decided to submit it. It was just gonna be a experimental project. :D

I didn't want to show how the girl dies because I wanted you to try and make up your own solutions. One of them kind of movies. :D

[Drunk Again..]

It was a pretty good music video.

I like the song you used in it. The graphics could be improved though. It had a pretty story line but maybe there could be more humor in it. It was nice and long. The lip sync wasn't very good though, it made it look like he wasn't really singing which made is an important part of the movie. It was good but could be improved in some ways.

JimmyDodger responds:

I wasn't really trying to go for humour in this movie..Being a sad movie and all. I don't think it would be good if it's all sad, then right at the end, something jumps out and says "JOKING! THIS IS FUNNY. JOKEY" or something like that. I didn't really wanna lose the style the movie had.

Thanks for the review.

[Ganon Knows Best]

It was great!

It would have been better if it were longer though. It was very funny and the story line was good. The art in it was good but I think they could have been a bit better. The music you chose in it was good. I laughed when I watched it. Just wondering, why did you choose Captain Falcon's dad to be Ganon? It was a good flash that got me to laugh.

insertnamehere85 responds:

Thanks.. I greatly appreciate it. This is only a part of a 6 min episode.. So more is to come along with more episodes. It just takes time for me to spit them out.. I am a beginner of some sorts.. Thanks and keep watching!

[Sonic RPG eps 5]

This was just truly awesome!

The game idea was simply the best! Congrats! I added you to my favorite authors list! Seriously, I love how you could control Sonic looking for the keys and fighting monsters as they came up. I really like the idea and the game is really fun! The graphics were really awesome! The music you chose for the flash were great! I just love the fact that you could battle monsters in it! Whenever you submit a Sonic RPG, I always see it when it's under judgement or when it just passed under judgement. I'm glad you put voice acting in the newer ones unlike the older ones. I think the movie looks a lot better with sprites also. It was cool how you could actually control Sonic and walk around the castle while you had the challenge of looking for keys. I'm glad you also put a password for the scenes after the battle of the monsters so people can't just cheat and go to the scene select and go to the scenes after the battle. A lot of the old Sonic RPG's had lots of grammar errors but I didn't catch quite that many in this one. The battle style and plot were great also! I like how one of the battles you can't view their HP or anything else. The backgrounds you used were very good and the music for the fights were good too! I like how it went from a movie to a game! In your old games, it seemed impossible to lose, but now it's actually possible. That is a good thing though. It's cool how if you lose some HP, MP, or SP in a battle, you still have to carry on how much you had last time you fought so you can't just easily waste all your MP and SP in one battle. I liked the whole story of the series as well! The game was very fun and I liked it very much! Keep up the good job!

MidNightMaren responds:

o_O WOW! You wrote a lot this time dude! But thanks you a lot, you always review my submitions, and give me some advices. Thank for your time, and im glad you liked!

[Tails and his GBA]

I really love the idea!

It is a really good idea that Tails and his friends could travel through different video game worlds with Chaos Control. I think that was a good idea that you can choose from two different endings. I thought it was funny how Tails and Sonic went into their own video game. I liked the music and graphics in it also. It was a really good movie!

RupeeClock responds:

Thanks much.